воскресенье, 29 января 2012 г.

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Dear, Alan Glynn, to start with, I'd like to say that I really apreciate your book.
 The first thing that I like is that the book shows all the problems we have in our modern society. That is very important for me to understand that the main character is like the real person-like you and me.
He has a lot of addictions and difficulties with work, with money and many others. And after taking NZT he becomes like a superhero. What did I like else-is that effect of the drug is scientifically proved.
  The thing that I didn't like is that the novel isn't instructive. The main character doesn't understand that his actions were wrong. Quite the cotrary, he makes his career due to NZT and finds the way how to make the effect eternal. 
  So, Mr. Glynn, if I were you I would just change the ending and nothing else. If the hero realized that his actions were wrong he would become a role model for our generation.

1 комментарий:

  1. A nice letter, but where's the end phrase?

    Mind:
    What did I like else-is that > What is more, I liked that...
    Quite the cotrary > contrary

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